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glorybox Junior Member
since 2000-09-17
Posts 26 |
little wing like a girl wrapped up flying in the breeze beautiful girl smiles for a moment comes around between spaced and insanity maybe she's on ecstasy with her little wing to release her very sweet girl gave her whole life if you please but your crazy singing off over yonder if you wanted her she could sing too little wing she has her own releases her own beliefs it'll just fly away when you look around at everything when you strike a small match in simplicity just like that keeping her real in delicacy and strength everthing you see is in her little wing hers stars are purple by a nice moon flying groovy within a haze **total Jimi Hendrix inspiration** |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
i liked this a lot. it's all pretty and floating around. especially the ending.  jann elizabeth |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
This touched my alternative side, tho' I wasn't thinking Jimi Hendrix (not much of a fan of his) but rather Tori Amos, using her masterful talent on her Boisendorf piano to touch the right amount of anger and sadness to make this one very real. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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