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brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland

0 posted 2000-06-26 05:33 PM


In exile out on the landing,
aching bones will follow
after I lost vocation,
sealing faith in the empty aisles
of chiming churches.
Rickets splinter as bones
are ground on leprosy sores.
In the refuge of denial
little children are happily crucified.
I have released angels of their virgin purity,
they crawled burdened with desire,
stranded on frozen wings
still clinging to virtue,
I swallowed them whole as helpless insects.

Out on the landing
faith wastes in elegance.
I will always be alone,
even with devotion to you.
Silence your words of scripture
for I am still deafened by the vile lies
of Leviticus 20:13 the hate cry
of your righteous feeble flock
worshipping with select ignorance.
Stripping to my natural skin
clothed only in obscenity
with no fig leaf censorship.
I will forsake heaven refusing
to be tainted with the inheritance
of original sin. Out on the landing
I remain as a leper to your sacred communion.



"but for the lovers, their arms Round the griefs of the ages, Who pay no praise or wages Nor heed my craft or art"
Dylan Thomas.

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Deranger
Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there
1 posted 2000-06-26 05:39 PM


little children are happily crucified.
I have released angels of their virgin purity,
they crawled burdened with desire,
stranded on frozen wings
still clinging to virtue,
I swallowed them whole as helpless insects.

Now thats power.


kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
2 posted 2000-06-26 05:53 PM


your gift is from God.  what a true testament to Him.  i hope i read that right, i see praise to Him in spite of it all.  something i am still learning to do!!  what a read.  thank you mr madden.

kynder

Across the gateway of my heart,
I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!"
But love came laughing by and
Cried "I enter everywhere!!!"

Herbert Shipman

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
3 posted 2000-06-26 06:33 PM


Deranger, thank you for your comments and for your reply.

kynder, yes I see a God, a wonderful image of God but I can not find him in the church. The words I heard there just drove me further away from him/it. I don't know if there is something I am missing but when all the facts are presented before me, they don't quite spell out a loving God. All the same I still believe in the one corner stone of the catholic faith "love thy neighbour as thy self, and do unto others what you wish do onto you."
Thank you for your wonderful reply, while my religion is dead my spirit is strong and that is where I found God.

"but for the lovers, their arms Round the griefs of the ages, Who pay no praise or wages Nor heed my craft or art"
Dylan Thomas.

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2000-06-26 08:52 PM


Deep meanderings here Brian!!  Loved it.  Glad to see you believe in God,  I do too.  I like you don't like church much, sometimes but generally my relationship with him is a private thing.  Totally christan beliefs I have gathered from a few different religions. I even checked it out with my priest and he said that was fine etc.  So I can relate to this piece.  Good work hon  

I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


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