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The Final Word - A Quatrain
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The Final Word - A Quatrain |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
The Final Word To ocean waves the thoughts of divinity relegate And attempt not the recesses of thy mind to sate With the empty words of the seventy two Books For thy spirit is wine and it already has a date! *****TAMAM SHUDH – ALL PURE****** |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
wonderful work i love it. keep it up and welcome to this place I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
Thank you Jeremiah - It is nice to have someone appreciate ones work. I'll keep it up. And keep up the encouragement. Deepak Menon |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
(Note: A "Quatrain" is a unit of four lines of verse) Excellent, Deepak. Scholarly work. Hardrock |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Keep them coming, Deepak! Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
WoW! This is FAnTAsTIC! I love it! More, please! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
Thank you all for these words of splendid praise In celebration - to the heavens my arms I raise And send up my voice to the heavens like some shooting star Alas! It too vanishes into the firmament without a trace! Deepak |
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