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The Beach................ |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas 
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Walking along the beach Smelling the ocean's air Kicking the coarse sand Dazing off into a blank stare Listening to the seagulls Watching the kids at play Warming myself with the sun Knowing I shouldnt stay Feeling the gentle breeze Looking at the clouds above Touching the smooth rocks Wanting to feel your love Staring at the surf Forgetting all the pain Seeing your reflection As it begins to rain No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Mags...you really took me there with you. Beautiful!!! Hardrock |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Thanx Marv,I am glad you liked this one. DkW P.S. And a warm welcoming back *hug* to ya also  No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Nice work. Cool imagery. It took me there, also. |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Hi Dark Kisses, Kept me wanting to read more. The last lines. Very cool. "Seing your reflection As it begins to rain" I love that image!" Smiles.  Joy |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, I have been to that exact beach. Great images. Sandra |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
This is just superb DkW! Loved it! And yes, *sigh*, have stared at the surf many a time...It impelled me to write an epilogue! "The rain beats down harder As I stare at the surf Then miracously you appear On my very home turf. Passion reflected in your eyes As we stare each other down The rain beating in time Wiping away our frowns. Loving caresses, hungry kisses Sand and surf and rain and you Gently keeping in time Both knowing what is true." Take care! ~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Well thanx everyone,I enjoyed the image also as i wrote this. And WOW Tara....!!! That was GREAT! A beautiful ending, I must say. Thanx again, DkW No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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marcos New Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 8 |
I really liked this poem, its really nice, straightforward, and heartfelt, thanks for the read, look forward to more |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
Hmm, this one makes me wonder  "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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