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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
She walks down the road that life has thrown A journey she has to make all alone Finding her way on a path she does fear praying no obsticles will suddenly appear. To darken the way , to make for tough choices indecisive,apprehensive, Oh those scared voices. That conjure up demons that she trys to fight. Racing threw her mind,feet desperate for flight. Till the memory of a voice stills those fanciful fears takes her trembling hand and draws her near. It is the voice of a spirit,an unseen comfort in the night. That lights her path,and calms her every fright Speaks to her soul though he makes not a sound Soothes her surroundings, she feels him around Throws away her indecisions ,stills her quickening heart Guides her terrified steps,never to part |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Suzanne, this is lovely. I would like to meet this wonderful guide, I'm still alone.. Very lyrical sound, and nice flow here. Sandra |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
I get a very soothing spiritual feeling out of this. A calm secure feeling. Beautiful. Ron Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
A very serene mood in this one. Wonderful! It hit the spot tonight!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
When i first wrote this poem i did not define who the guide was. I feel that in us all there is something that guides and directs us. Maybe it is God ,your soul mate,best friend or maybe it is just you.But if you look for it in times of fear it will guide you to where you need to go.And Sandra as long as you love yourself you are never really alone. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This reminds me of some dark periods in my life when I felt like no one in this world could console me and yet it was a time I felt very close to God...and I felt his holy spirit with me, God's presence was comforting me and loving me and caring for me...a tender feeling...James |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Lovely thoughts here... everyone needs one of these I think... sometimes the recognition comes too late or not at all - and that is a tragedy. Good work  K The wind shifts like this: Like a human without illusions... This is how the wind shifts: Like a human, heavy and heavy, Who does not care. W.S |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Suzanne how can you write these feelings so well. Most readers can easily liken themselves to this character at some stage. It is kind of inspirational too, for we all must listen for and heed the wisdom from our spirit guide. Wise words, beautifully shared... Thanks.. Isis *I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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