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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
She held my hand As tears caressed her cheek, I can't recall a time Which I've seen her so weak. The color from her lips Once velvet and clear, Twinged in intense pain Quivered in fear. Those angelic blue eyes Piercing my soul, Have lost their gleam And stare bitter cold. She tries to speak But it's merely a whisper, I can't understand So I just lean down and kiss her. That skin so soft Now has no tone, What am I to do When she leaves me alone? Running my fingers Through her matted hair, To let her know Even the end I care. This desolate bed For months be confined, Recalling a time when She had such a vibrant mind. That last night for hours We sat silent and cried, With one last breath she said, "I love you" Then my angel died. Jeremy T. Sellers 11/6/00 2:31 AM "I'm alive, for you, I'm awake, because of you" -Godsmack < !signature--> "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe [This message has been edited by firejerm (edited 11-06-2000).] |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Wow now that was beautiful. Loving someone that much is a beautiful thing and then they die!  I guess the saying is correct.... its better to love then never to have loved at all. (or however that goes)  great work my friend, DkW No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Oh goodness!  This is unreal! Oh wow, how it touched my heart... especially the ending... take care.~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very touching, and beautiful poem. Sandra |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
A wonderful poem and i wish you the best of luck!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Trisha4_u Junior Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 28 |
She spoke, she whispered, Did you listen?? or did you dream of looking into those endless eyes? She asked only one thing... and you know the answer! ~~~~~~~~ Love has no bounds of time... nor does friendship and wisdom of the ages. |
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