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Xeonox
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0 posted 2000-10-27 01:32 AM


Feeling the craters of the past on my face,

Multiply like cells growing at astounding rate,

When the habit is formed one creates the rest,

The agony that follows one never forgets.



Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



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Ron K. Fox
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1 posted 2000-10-27 05:45 PM


this is much deeper than it looks. has my mind going. good. very good.
Isis
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2 posted 2000-10-27 06:44 PM


There is an old saying wrinkles show where laughter has been!!!!!  Sometimes true more often not, they can also show where pain and heartache have been, and even how long they've been there!!
Deep words and musings here hon, great stuff.
Isis

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MiseryDivine
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3 posted 2000-10-28 01:22 AM


such complication simplified....good work
LM
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4 posted 2000-10-28 01:01 PM


Hey, this is very deep, I liked it a lot!
I always enjoy reading your works, you've got such interesting style.
Take Care!

"Most girls want a man with the mean green
Don't wanna dance if he can't be
Everything that I dream up
A man that understands real love"


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5 posted 2000-10-30 01:54 AM


Thanks LM for you support and thank you everyone else.  

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



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