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Ron K. Fox
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since 2000-10-24
Posts 925


0 posted 2000-10-26 11:13 AM


An ebony curtain,
Night falls.
My hand reaches out,
Slips deeper into a shadow of a shadow.
Whispers of whispers,
Swirl about my ears.
Faint scents cascade in my memory,
Waterfalls of tears.
The thumping of a ghostly drum,
Heart be still.
With closed eyes,
I see clearly,
With secrets revealed,
Deep inside the shadow of shadows.




[This message has been edited by Ron K. Fox (edited 10-26-2000).]

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taramw
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

1 posted 2000-10-26 11:20 AM


This is such a beautiful heartfelt poem!  I really liked it...    take care!
~ Tara ~

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

Jannel
Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA
2 posted 2000-10-26 01:12 PM


these are beautifully dark images, and you treat them well.

jann elizabeth

If you can feel that staying human is worthwhile, even when it can't have any result whatever, you've beaten them.
-1984


MiseryDivine
Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114
Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh)
3 posted 2000-10-27 12:02 PM


ooooo...darkness feels so good...i loved the way i could actually feel it...divinely beautiful!
MiseryDivine~

EagleOne
Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
4 posted 2000-10-27 08:16 AM


Shadows within shadows...... I like!

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

bamagirl
Junior Member
since 2000-10-27
Posts 20

5 posted 2000-10-27 11:28 AM


Wow,  beautifull written.
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
6 posted 2000-10-27 06:18 PM


Beautiful Ron!!   You, your spirit and your words have a way of peace and inspiration about them.  More, more, more....... please?
Isis

*Good will towards all beings is the highest religion*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~


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