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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas 
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If I were to give u a river To sail so peaceful and free Would u float away Or coming swimming back to me? If I were to give u a forrest With trees high in the sky Would you look just for me Or just sit and cry? If I were to give u a magic lamp With a Genie for you to see Would u make 3 wishes for you Or make 3 wishes to be with me? If I were to give u all the money That could fulfill ur destiny Would u turn and run away Or share ur wealth with me? I do not have these things to give But if I did I would give u too All I have is the love in my heart And all that i give to you! No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi DKW, I know the feeling, you would love to give someone so much. But love is the biggest thing you can give. So he is fortunate to have yours. Sandra |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
I agree that love is by far the best gift to give , lovely poem |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I know the feeling - you want to give them the world and it STILL isn't enough.. He is lucky hon, hope he realises YOUR gifts.. Isis *Good will towards all beings is the highest religion* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Wow! Terrific!  Did you write this on my behalf?!  lol Take care.~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Would u make 3 wishes for you Or make 3 wishes to be with me? I hope he makes the correct choice |
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MiseryDivine Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh) |
what adoarable cuteness....hope it all works out MiseryDivine~ |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
DKW~ If you really could give these things, it makes you wonder what he would choose.......hopefully your love would be #1. I really enjoyed this. -SEA |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
"All I have is the love in my heart And all that i give to you!" That my friend is the most precious gift of all! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Night Chica Junior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 39Vermont |
Your poem is almost an exact reflection to the questions I have and what I feel for someone. Only my outcome will probably not be as good as yours will. Wonderfully written. I loved it. Megs I was never one to patiently pick up broken fragments and glue them together again and tell myself that the mended whole was as good as new. What is broken is broken- and I'd rather remember it as it was at its best than mend it and see the broken places as long as I lived. -- Margaret Mitchell |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
DKW, you gave the best gift of all, your poetry and yourself. How could he ask for more? Be well Kethry. Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Hey DKW! This is so sweet, I know exactly what you mean! I too would like to give everything I've got if it helps... Or just to give everything I've got, just to make him happy. Coz my love sertainly didn't do the trick! Great poem, take care! "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
I have to admit, I hate reading. I know that sounds strange coming from a writer, however I'm becoming addicted to your stuff. After reading this I can only think of one thing to say, MARRY ME! ha ha ha...this is one of the most sincere, heart-felt pieces I have ever read. MORE MORE MORE...he he he, have a great day! Jeremy "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Well thanx everyone! Its kinda funny how you can have so much to give yet no one to give it to. And when ya do find someone they never have anything to give ya back.  Thanx again, DkW Psssst Jeremy... (whipsering)..... buy me a ring hehe but thanx for the interest in my poems  No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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bamagirl Junior Member
since 2000-10-27
Posts 20 |
awwwww... too sweet!!! |
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