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A Test. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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A test of unconditional love Would I pass or would I fail? I had already given you my heart and my soul What more proof did you need? Were not my words, my songs, my very essence enough for you to know? A test of unconditional love You told me your heart had set sail The words you spoke to me began to take their toll You had already planted the seed The test began, my heart the subject waiting for love to grow A test of unconditional love From the beginning I was doomed to fail Why would you not be true in order to reach your goal? To your heart my heart did plead Begging for one word from you yearning for your heart to show A test of unconditional love Does there really ned to be one? You used my heart, You tore my soul, You abused my faith But you know what? I still love you. . . ---------------------------------------------------------------- < !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 06-25-2000).] |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Hmm... great poem!  Love's a funny thing isn't it?! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I don't like tests. And I don't like games. Put the two together and it's bad news. Very power poem, sir. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
So right DeVine, God I hate games, it tear me apart more than anything else, Great poem Sven. Joel I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
"Oh the games people play now...every night and every day now. Never saying what they mean now....never meaning what they say". But you still lover her.....Nice piece Sven...Hardrock |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sven, I liked this a lot, the feeling of betrayal, and the unfairness of the games, the tests. Sometimes it seems that no matter what you did, it would not be the right thing. I have been there. Catalinamoon |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sven, such a sad poem. Only you can express something so well with your words. Playing mind games are very unfair I admit, but, I must confess that I do at first make men go through tests to see if they are worthy of having my heart because I've been hurt very bad before Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Strong words and emotions Sven shared wonderfully as only you can. Some never seem to outgrow such childishness, they are the losers in the end, they miss so much. I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Very interesting poem Sven......though the heart has room for only one. |
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