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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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Sunny Queensland

0 posted 2000-10-06 12:01 PM


Oceans of love brought us together,
And those very tidal swells will never break,
Just like this mysterious union,
Nothing can ever quite fill the ache.

Can't explain this thing between us,
More powerful and deep than anything we've known,
Lasting on and off for decades,
Fulfilling the seed of love that were long ago sown.

Our light in the darkness,
Our little piece of heaven on Earth,
It means so much to both of us,
It has so much more than a dollar's worth.

Souls and bodies spanning across space and time,
Souls touched so long ago,
Bodies singing together without word or rhyme,
Seems nothing will ever stop this flow.

So as the moon has it's pull on the ocean,
You have that pull over me,
With something untangible and bigger,
Than either of us have ever seen.

It warms the embers on a cold and lonely night,
It warms the soul through each and every day,
And our ocean of love,
Will never wash away......



*Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~



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Xeonox
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1 posted 2000-10-06 11:56 PM


Simply superb!!!! Awesome!!! HOT!!!!

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



EagleOne
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2 posted 2000-10-07 09:46 AM


Wonderful writing!

"Nothing can ever quite fill the ache", I love that line.


"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

Sven
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3 posted 2000-10-07 11:49 PM


quote:
And our ocean of love,
Will never wash away......


No it won't my friend. . .

Beautiful. . . just beautiful. . .


That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2000-10-08 05:29 PM


An ocean of love is quite a lot of love...a wonderful blessing to enjoy...James
Isis
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5 posted 2000-10-10 09:02 PM


Actually there are two oceans for me, Pacific and Atlantic and those in the know will know!!  LOL  Thanks for reading my friends  
Isis

*Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~



boardman
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since 2000-05-09
Posts 44

6 posted 2000-10-11 12:29 PM


Hi Isis,

You have a wonderful way with words!
I like it.

My favorite piece:
So as the moon has it's pull on the ocean,
You have that pull over me,

I will be waiting for more!

Vince

"Explosions, are just the thoughts of a creative person." - Boardman

Isis
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7 posted 2000-10-11 12:41 PM


Thanks Vince  

*Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~



carolinadreams
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since 2000-07-20
Posts 142

8 posted 2000-10-11 01:25 AM


I not only thank you for your writing, but I adore your skill. The ability to paint emotions is not something that comes easily, and to some it won't come. Knowing the island of Puerto Rico, I have seen both too.

Smile, you're loved!

LM
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since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

9 posted 2000-10-11 05:21 PM


This is great! I just loved the lines :
"So as the moon has it's pull on the ocean,
You have that pull over me..."
Beautiful writing!
Take Care!



"Most girls want a man with the mean green
Don't wanna dance if he can't be
Everything that I dream up
A man that understands real love"


Isis
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Sunny Queensland
10 posted 2000-10-11 08:35 PM


Thankyou my friends  
Carolina Dreams I've got to talk to you!!!
Isis

*Good will towards all beings is the highest religion*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~


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