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Xeonox
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0 posted 2000-10-04 12:20 PM


  Dripping eyes filling the cradle,
  Fooling a baby with an age old riddle,

  Snatching the skin of sanity itself,
  Till the people murder themselves,

  Gushing the mouth of evil with greed,
  Filling it with souls that did not heed,

  Cutting the veins that can feel,
  This gruesome pain that’ll never heal.



Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



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shadydaze
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since 2000-10-02
Posts 85

1 posted 2000-10-04 12:40 PM


youre quite the psychopath.
your poetry is good.
your inspiration...
how grotesque.
your morbid poetry amuses me.

boardman
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since 2000-05-09
Posts 44

2 posted 2000-10-04 01:21 AM


Hi Xeonox,

I like your choice of words.
Nice job!

My favorite line is
Snatching the skin of sanity itself,

Who is to say who is sain anyway?

Vince

"Explosions, are just the thoughts of a creative person." - Boardman

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