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Dark Poetry #2

the weight of thought

silentsky
Member

since 2000-08-09

Posts 114

0 posted 2000-10-02 07:47 AM

occupied by strange
concepts
the heaviness
of my head
their glares
and my own
can't seem
to convince
me
gather
my
self
inflicted
pain
head so heavy
i have trouble lifting it.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2000-10-02 07:54 AM

silentsky,
after this little effort you should not only lift your head you should hold it high and be proud.
Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

2 posted 2000-10-02 01:41 PM

Great work, loved every word.

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)

shadydaze
Member

since 2000-10-02

Posts 85

3 posted 2000-10-02 02:18 PM

my head hangs low like yours as well
within my mind burns mental hell
the weight is often too much to bear
but there is noone with which to share
so i guess we must all forward trek
despite the burdens on our backs
and within our minds, in our heads
and carry on til we are dead

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