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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

0 posted 2000-09-29 08:00 PM


If only words could express how I feel,
If only, If only,
If only I could really touch him,
The same as he's touched me,
If only, If only...

I've never met him,
Yet he knows me so well,
From thousands of miles away,
He needn't ask, he can just tell.

He knows my innermost feelings,
The hurt, the confusion, the pride,
He knows when I'm on a downer,
And briefly in his rhymes I can hide.

If only I could do for him,
What he's done for me,
If only I could be his rock,
From far across the sea.
If only, If only..

He's had his troubles too,
Misunderstandings and prejudices,
I only hope I have helped him,
Half as much as he's helped me.

Sven I cannot get it out,
Cannot find the words to explain,
How having a friend such as you,
Has been a diversion from life's pain.

If only you could see what I see,
Feel what I feel,
Then there'd be an inkling of true understanding,
Then there'd be a balanced keel.

Thankyou my friend for everything,
For holding my hand across the spance of space and time,
For understanding, respecting and loving me,
A kindred spirit with loving words in rhyme.



*Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~



© Copyright 2000 Isis - All Rights Reserved
Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
1 posted 2000-09-30 01:51 PM


Isis~~~Thats what I love most about this place. I have made friends with a few people that I honestly trust very much. And its good that you are showing your appreciation to Sven by writing this beautiful poem. I hope he likes it cause I sure did!!!
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-09-30 07:03 PM


Thanks Erin, this poet was stumped couldn't really get it out how I wanted, but the message is there all the same.
Thanks
Isis

*Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~



Sven
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
3 posted 2000-10-01 04:36 PM


and what a wonderful message it is. . .  

Thank you so much my kindred. . . this has touched me very deeply. . . I am so glad that we have become friends. . . I don't know what I would do without your wonderful heart and understanding. . . it means a lot to me. . .

I'm glad that I can do the same for you. . . that our friendship and love can stretch over these words and wires is amazing. . .

Thank you again. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
4 posted 2000-10-02 06:22 AM


Isis, amazing write for an amazing friendship.
Be well
Kethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

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