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CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043


0 posted 2000-09-18 04:04 AM





STOMP, SQUIRM, SCREAM AND YELL

Look within her chestnut eyes
See the innocence and wonder why
The day has come to sit child down
Educate her for there is evil outside
Lurking about in broad daylight
Image of man or woman who seem kind
They will say anything to lead you astray
Now pay attention to what I say
Defence for child who knows not why
Trust no-one unless momma is nearby
I plead with her listen to my words
Stomp your feet, squirm in grip, scream and yell
These actions will aid you to deter evil around
Still I get question from babe on lap,
"Why would stranger take me away like that"
Such a statement from an innocent child
Just seems to tear at me inside out
So another night goes by all is calm
Though difficult to put this scenario behind
Only to trust instincts and memory of child
Stomp, Squirm, Scream and Yell

*Coco*

Felt the need to get this out..inspired by an incident within the city whereby a child abducter remains a fugitive and parents are frantic

Why must a child be subjected to such evil in today's society just beat's the heck outta me...

This I am sure is by no means the way the Heavenly ones want for families to be brought up or is this another test for man/woman kind...




[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 09-18-2000).]

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Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2000-09-18 05:38 AM


CocoBaci,
your poem made me STOP and think,
SQUIRM with the thought that could be happening right now
SCREAM with the thought of it happening to innocents
and YELL at the world for it's heartlessness. Great, thought provoking write.
Kethry.


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

bluebrdy65
Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276
Gladys,
2 posted 2000-09-18 06:49 AM


This is great
and children need to be aware
of the dangers that lurk
and the poor things cant
comprehend all the evils that await them
I have a son
who doesnt know a stranger
which scares me and his little mind cant comprehend why everyone isn't his friend
luckily for us we live in the country
where most people know one another
I carried him to the beach one time and a stranger tried to get him to come to his car right in front of me
at which point I was stomping yelling and screaming
because my trusting little angel was headed straight for the car
The man drove away
But this really scared me
its ashame that the world must have
so much evil in it
But we must strive to to keep the good
alive
Blue

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