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Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~

0 posted 2000-09-11 03:22 PM




~*Being Set Free*~

One day the world
decided to close in on me.
It was hard to realize
but so easy to see.
For a reason
that I dont even know.
And the pain I have
has no reason to be shown.
It has been trapped
deep inside my soul.
And setting it free
is something that is my goal.
The day my pain
will forever be free.
Its the day this blinding light,
will allow me to be set free.


~*Each day is a treasure box from God, just waiting to be opened*~

© Copyright 2000 Erin Erbs - All Rights Reserved
Virgin Suïcide
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since 2000-08-11
Posts 319
Netherlands
1 posted 2000-09-11 04:18 PM


you will be set free...

luv, Virgin Suïcide

I dream about how it's gonna end
Approaching me quickly
Living a life of fear
I only want my mind to be clear...
~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
2 posted 2000-09-11 04:46 PM


You know what Virgin??I cant wait for the day to come that I will no longer feel this pain that I feel.

~*Each day is a treasure box from God, just waiting to be opened*~

eegood
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 41
Chicago,IL
3 posted 2000-09-11 05:56 PM


if only i could express myself so smoothly and effortfully.  to answer your question from a previous post...oak park.
Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
4 posted 2000-09-11 07:35 PM


EEGood~~~Thanks for the reply. Hey your not to far from me, but we arent neighbors either!!

~*Each day is a treasure box from God, just waiting to be opened*~

gjam
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since 2000-08-23
Posts 85
Arkansas
5 posted 2000-09-12 12:45 PM


Good poem Erin,
I feel you on this one...
I really like it!!

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
6 posted 2000-09-12 12:58 PM


Thanks for the reply gjam. Im glad to here that I am not the only one going through this sort of pain.

~*Each day is a treasure box from God, just waiting to be opened*~

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