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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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Why do you play tricks with me? What have I done so wrong? Was loving you a crime? Was caring for you so bad? Why do you hurt me? You broke my heart once, Please don't break it again. Please stop the pain. The pleasure that you get runs deep in my skin and flows through my veins, The laughter you might achieve from this rips my heart and throws it at your feet, only to be stepped on again, The thought of your kiss, just melts me, just to hear you say hello feels me with joy, The promise has been broken, not once, not twice, but a million times, Tell me how do I trust you again, How can you blame me of something I know nothing about? How can you hurt me and seek pleasure in it? How can I start taking what you say seriously? How? Are we not meant to be? If you say so, I am gone without a trace, I don't observe the trend of emotions you lay before me, What am I suppose to do? I need to feel secure, You are suppose to be my needy hand through bad times, But you are the hand that has shoved me away, You keep pushing me away, Why? Alas what shall I do dear? Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
WOW WOW WOW the questions you ask here. great work love it. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
As always Jeremiah you keep me going.  Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
promises promises.... wow i love your line about those. i tend to use the word excellent an awful lot with you.... let me bust out my thesarus... uh superb, fantastic, divine??? kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
well written poem... have been there and know the feeling... well expressed If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
That place where our needs are not getting met, leaving us to ask all the "why" questions..A very vivid insight into what the relationship is missing. Excellent poem!!!! Enjoyed very much The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
I don't observe the trend of emotions you lay before me, You are suppose to be my needy hand through bad times, But you are the hand that has shoved me away, these phrases are so wonderfully thought out, Xeonox thank you ~~softsmiles Maureen |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Xeo...lots of good thoughts here...and ponderable questions. Very nice. Hardrock |
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