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Remorseful, Silent
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Remorseful, Silent |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle 
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Remorseful, Silent Vivid recollection of a past tomorrow when anger surpassed tight control, birthing fear in few moments and sorrow bled into corners of unsuspecting soul. Vivid reds, blues and blacks reflect in memory's transparent window of swollen, shocked eyes glaze deflected, spilling on marked cheek, tear-streaked flow. Vivid the remorseful daze burning his face, staring at shaking hand like it wasn't his own. Pleading regrets and begging my place, my pain far away from the anger he'd shown, to those brighter tomorrows where time might erase that dark day, in hopes he has grown. --...chanson~ "Music, when soft voices die, Vibrates in the memory..." P.B. Shelley |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Chanson, This is a poignant poem that will vibrate in my memory for some time to come. Be well Kethry. "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Kethry, thank you for your kind words  --...chanson~ "Music, when soft voices die, Vibrates in the memory..." P.B. Shelley |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very serious words here, and very well expressed. Take care. Catalinamoon |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
I will, catalinamoon, thank you! --...chanson~ "Music, when soft voices die, Vibrates in the memory..." P.B. Shelley |
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