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Xeonox
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0 posted 2000-08-29 02:52 AM



I sit down to read a book for my class,
But my mind has its own agenda that includes grazing in the grass,

I take a few minutes to go and eat ,
Turns out I spend hour and three beats,

Flipping the switch to type up my paper,
Not  long after I  am humming to the song that goes, rap her,

Finally in the quietness of the night I seek to study,
But before that I decide to call up my buddy,

Around ten I get off the phone,
Then I decide to check my e-mail once more,

Midnight strikes as I glance at the door,
Time to say nighty night that’s  for sure.


Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

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LM
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1 posted 2000-08-29 04:14 PM


            

Xeonox!!! I know! I know!!! I totally understand, wanted to write something like this myself! I'm so sick of studying, I can't take it no more!!!!!!

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2 posted 2000-08-29 10:07 PM


LM, you are always an optimistic. Thanks for your comments as usual.



Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

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