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Life without a heart |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
My heart has broken so am I taken from this life? Without a heart is there life? I can not feel the air I breath somehow I am far away as if hidden in this cage My heart is broken the blood curled dry so how can I possibly be alive Broken into My heart seems to be hemorrhaging profusely so tell me is it possible to live without a heart? |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
No you can't... But it will heal and then you'd feel the air you breath and feel alive again. Beautiful poem, Good luck!  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
It is possible to live with a broken heart.. Possible but not fun.. A broken heart continues to beat because it knows it must take you away from the pain and back to a place of happiness...for you and your heart...James |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
No heart? Maybe you should come with me? I’m off to see the wizard, the Wizard of Oz. ---------------------- Spreading insanity, one post at a time “Writing about darkness comes easily for me. I just close my eyes and write what I |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Hey deranger never thought of that so I'm off to see the wizard the wonderful wizard of oz... |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
thx jmlee and LM . For a breath of fresh air. |
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