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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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The storyline in this pure fantasy but I guess the emotion's real enough. Rosalind Could we start again, please wipe the slate, start anew begin from the beginning? For I'm frightened, ill at ease Lonely, scared, feeling blue And my fears are winning. Hector My love, my love you don't see, pain and pleasure are entwined and what begins with surety becomes delusion of the mind. Rosalind My memories creep, silently they overcome my logic and beget the demon, sorrow they shroud me in their ragged lee and I cry out, please hold my hand I cannot face the morrow. Hector The past is past, it has no power to hurt unless you let it. I understand your sorrow dear But can't you just forget it. Rosalind Hector, Hector if you love me, you'll see my suffering end before the madness takes my mind I cannot stand insanity I am syphilitic, soul-sick and sore I ask you to be kind Hector My love, let me hold you gently as you, child-like, sobbing weep I'll caress your hair until you softly, softly sleep. Then Hector took his dagger and stabbed her in the heart. She gave a gasp, a tiny moan, her essence then did part and Hector in deep sorrow took his own life as well, now eternal they're together be it heaven or in hell. "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Wow... Kethry, that's amazing... I loved it , how you made Rosaline's words longer and Hector shorter, it's known that women can open up more freely and man are kinda cheap in words... And the unexpected end... it was really awesome... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This is powerful stuff here Kethry... very moving too... of love, lunacy, crime and repentance... great work... I just hope that the theme and the setting is not misinterpreted... regards, sudhir |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~KETHRY!!! How did you do that? More. Please. Gawd! That is amazing. What a write,...YOU BET the feeling is real and alive and still there. I'm going to have to go read that one again. Take care you. *Peace. [This message has been edited by SpitFire (edited 08-21-2000).] |
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Dedreia Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 172Kokomo, Indiana, United States |
I am definatley with Spitfire on this one...More Please! Awesome work here. Dee  "It doesn't matter who you love, or how you love, but that you love" Rod McKuen |
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Dedreia Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 172Kokomo, Indiana, United States |
I am definately with Spitfire on this one...MORE PLEASE!! Awesome work here. Dee "It doesn't matter who you love, or how you love, but that you love" Rod McKuen |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Oh * snÃff * sniff * sniff * How terribly final. Great work Keth' Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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