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darkstar
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0 posted 2000-08-20 11:46 AM


The Mist

Moving through this haze
I’m dazed
Blur of what I’m looking at
Everything runs together
Mixes and makes the murky water
That they call my thoughts
Incomprehensible words
Spoken by one I love
I am forced to move on
Through the fog that surrounds my life
I walk blindly towards the edge
My hands out before me
Reaching for something to cling to
I long for the safety of loving arms
So cruelly taken from me
Falling forward into the abyss
Through the haze
The daze
The mist


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1 posted 2000-08-20 12:56 PM


Great way to potray your emotions. I love it.

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

boji stone
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since 2000-08-13
Posts 62
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2 posted 2000-08-20 01:11 PM


ohhhhhh now this is good!
emotion packed,
way to go!

*S*

bj

~the breath, a mystery
of it's own ~~

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