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Virgin Suïcide
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since 2000-08-11
Posts 319
Netherlands

0 posted 2000-08-15 10:24 AM



Thank you
For all that you’ve done
For being there for me
Every time I needed you

For being such a great friend
Who stood there
When I needed someone
To listen

Thank you
For showing me
Things that I couldn’t see
Or just didn’t wanted to.

I wrote this poem for my friend, in our good times, before he left me...never got the change to let him read this one...too bad...but just want to say him that he really helped me...he will always be in my heart....

love, Virgin Suïcide...




"I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..."

Love is hard to live...
Try to live life in love....

© Copyright 2000 Virgin Suïcide - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2000-08-15 12:37 PM


VS....
       Sometimes it's good to write your
       feelings for someone down, even if
       they never read them. It helps you,
       personally.
           This was well written and
                   sincere......
           I enjoyed reading this!!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



Virgin Suïcide
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since 2000-08-11
Posts 319
Netherlands
2 posted 2000-08-15 01:32 PM


lots of thanks! this REALLY came from my heart and I think he knows it...but I think he had to sort HIS mind out too...I still mis him very much, but he's at my school, so I can still see him, but I can't talk to him the way I used to, just because he doesn't want it anymore...Maybe it got a bit too much for him or something...

love, Virgin Suïcide

"I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..."

Love is hard to live...
Try to live life in love....

darkstar
Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA
3 posted 2000-08-15 06:16 PM


That's really nice that you have some one that was there for you like that. I'm sorry that he doesn't talk to you anymore...funny..same thing happens to me a lot...

Dark Star

Virgin Suïcide
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since 2000-08-11
Posts 319
Netherlands
4 posted 2000-08-16 07:34 AM


thanks, we're kinda in the same position, aren't we?

love, Virgin Suïcide


"I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..."

Love is hard to live...
Try to live life in love....

moshpit
Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 143
cebu, philippines
5 posted 2000-08-16 07:51 AM


i'm gonna send this poem to my mom and dad.
Virgin Suïcide
Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319
Netherlands
6 posted 2000-08-16 08:09 AM


glad you liked it!! hope your parents wil like it too!!

good luck!
love, Virgin Suïcide


"I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..."

Love is hard to live...
Try to live life in love....

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