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Never cared... |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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Looking back on what you did, You never listened to me. You wondered why I told you not a thing, It's because you didn't wish to hear it. I tried to understand your life, Your trauma, your pain. Yet after all was said and done you never cared for what I needed. You selfishly act, only for you. You may not want to hear this, You may crave it not, But after this was over, Only 'you' is exactly what you got. I miss parts of what we had... But love it was not, Your crude way of acting, spoiled all of what it was. Are you happy now? Now that I've realized you never cared? I'd like to hear what everyone thinks about this...it just kinda popped up in my mind. [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 08-14-2000).] |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Jenn this is very good. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Bitter, twisted, not bad at all. I like it. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
I really liked it. Similar thing happened to me... Dark Star |
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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
I think Kethry said it all. It was really good, and I felt is, as I've been through the exact same thing. Well done, Jenn. Never give your heart away, it will always come back broken. ~Lil OnE~ |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
I think this broke away from any traditional prose, and was something that needed to be said after you had some time to boil on it. It is obviously directed at someone, and that someone should receive a copy of this! You still have loose ends here, tie them up, get the last word in, and move on!  Jeremy "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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