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I Cant Walk From You
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I Cant Walk From You |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin 
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You came into my life an explosion of joy a feeling so good turned me "little boy" So shy and intruiging you lured me in so little at first but you let it begin You slowly came closer like you've never done so scared that you trembled yet you did'nt run You wanted to show me who you really were you smiled and you told me of that you were sure You cried and I held you as you told me all I just reassured you let barriers fall All of the walls built came crashing hard down we shared with each other in feelings we drowned The best just kept coming as we entered in deep into each other the last mortal sin It happened, then you ran not sure what to do with all of these feelings that to you were new One day, just like best friends then next day you're gone no answers to tell me except "You did no wrong." Do I love you? or hate you? I know that its hard I know just what happened but you dealt the card You're lost and you dont know but dont want to learn would rather just leave it and live with the burn Yet each time I see you I feel you're still there I just cant forget you there's so much we've shared It feels good to hold you and just let you know that I'll never hate you or judge you as so The little I see you still makes me feel good and if you could answer I know that you would I'll always be standing with wide open arms whenever you need me to look past the harms I know that you're trying you've showed me, it's true which is the one reason I cant walk from you.< !signature--> Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. [This message has been edited by ThUnDeRkYsS (edited 08-14-2000).] |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
I am speechless.....the love behind every word is amazing. Until... "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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boji stone Member
since 2000-08-13
Posts 62USA |
i like the rhythm of this, and the content~ expressed yourself well, you did! bjstone~ |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~What a flow of emotions!!! Seems as if the speaker just opened up and let it pour. Perfect! Take care TK. *Peace. *Oh and how sweet is the title???,....soOo sweet!!! [This message has been edited by SpitFire (edited 08-14-2000).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Perfect, simply perfect. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
a-alibaster ~ Thank you, you are correct. So much of every kind of feeling are behind this... not an "easy" state of mind, but mine... nevertheless. boji-stone ~ Thank you for your kind words  Spitfire ~ Yes, I just pour them out... this topic seems to provide a neverending fountain of them for me to tap into now and then. Thank you. Kethry ~ Thank you so much. I am glad my writing comes accross this way to you  Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, I can relate to this so much. Nicely put, and I hope it works out for you in the end. catalinamoon Words are things, and a small drop of ink, falling, like dew, upon a thought produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions think. Lord Byron |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
this is really a caring poem loved it alot. Showed how much love really does sway us, very well written and such beauty in your words. |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Tremendous! And ditto to all of the above too! |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
I've been rereading this time and time again... Can't walk away from IT So touching... |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
oh my god, this is just simply beautiful!! I really enjoyed reading it! "You cried and I held you as you told me all I just reassured you let barriers fall" this kinda happened to me too, only my friend kinda dumped me after a very hard period, he just said he didn't want to anymore... (that's why, all my depressing poems and stuff...) loved this one!! love, Virgin Suïcide "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
catalinamoon ~ Thank you Me too, me too.Rosebud1229 ~ It is truly amazing, what you speak of. Thank you for your kind words. taramw ~ Thank you! LM ~ Your words are so touching to me... Thank you so much for expressing them as you did. Virgin_Suicide ~ I'm sorry to hear that {{HUGZ}} to you :~) It is very difficult... I dont know, sometimes just dont know how to look at it except I care so damn much about her due to how close we became and all we went through and so many other things that I cant let go. Makes me so happy and so uncertain and mixed feeling that I get lost if I think about it to much, so usually just choose not to 'till it's brought up or in front of me. Just one of lifes' curve balls I guess... {sigh} Thank you |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Thank you whoever you were for the kind email reguarding this poem... I tried to reply to you, but my message was returned to me as "Undeliverable". {{{HUGZ}}} To whoever you are :~) Thank you. Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
this is one of the best poems i have read all day. 2 thumbs up for you. i really liked this poem. good job!!!! |
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