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darkstar
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA

0 posted 2000-08-13 12:14 PM


Relating

Everytime I hear about sadness
I think about my own lack of gladness
When I hear about an abused child
I think my parents punishments weren’t mild
If I hear about suicide
A secret smile I try to hide
I have tried to do it
Didn’t go though with it
Wish I had
I’m still sad


© Copyright 2000 Danielle Zumstein - All Rights Reserved
Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
1 posted 2000-08-13 01:25 PM


Hi Darkstar,

This is so true this relating to others peoms and content it gets me to thinking and hopefully from the writers point of veiw I get another look at what ever it is that I can relate to giving me hopefully more wisdom in reguards to it. For me the sadness does not go away until I completely understand the why's to the proublem and even then the pain may not go away but it is understood. This poem in its self is full of wisdom and insightful thank you for sharing and welcome to passions I look forward to more of your work.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)


Virgin Suïcide
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since 2000-08-11
Posts 319
Netherlands
2 posted 2000-08-13 02:07 PM


hey darkstar!!
another great poem girl!
keep on going and take care, 'cuz you know I care! so don't do anything to yourself, ok?

love always, Virgin Suïcide...


"I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..."

Love is hard to live...
Try to live life in love....

darkstar
Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA
3 posted 2000-08-13 02:20 PM


Thanks...

I'll try not to...but you know how it gets...

Dark Star

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
4 posted 2000-08-14 05:39 AM


Darkstar,
So sorry you're sad
but don't feel too bad
we've all been there
it gets better, I swear!

Hugs
Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

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