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Rodney Belcher
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since 2000-06-06
Posts 227
Taylor, Michigan

0 posted 2000-08-11 10:37 AM


I miss you
I know you are gone
But the hurt still lingers
Knowing that a touch or a
Word or even a glimpse
Are no longer there
For me

Thoughts on my mind
Conjure ghosts of our past
For a moment they comfort me
But all too quickly they fade
And I am alone again

One day I hope to see you again
When finally my travels are through
Hoping you have missed me as I have you
And felt the loneliness of my absence
Then reunion will equal loss
I miss you
< !signature-->

Love one another-let God do the worrying,
Rodney


[This message has been edited by Rodney Belcher (edited 08-11-2000).]

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a-alibaster
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 392

1 posted 2000-08-11 11:00 AM


This is abolutally beautiful and so heart felt! Some thing that if I could I would say to my Grandmother, Grandfather, and father. (rest them gently)
Thank you for reminding me just how much I truly miss them!!
Until...


"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

Rodney Belcher
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since 2000-06-06
Posts 227
Taylor, Michigan
2 posted 2000-08-11 11:09 AM


thanks alibaster...my grandmother has been weighing heavily on my mind lately...you never truly get over them and wonder "what if?"...< !signature-->

Love one another-let God do the worrying,
Rodney


[This message has been edited by Rodney Belcher (edited 08-11-2000).]

juliet_2u
Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125
North Carolina
3 posted 2000-08-11 11:38 AM


Rodney, this is so warm and heartfelt. Very well done.
Juls

LM
Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

4 posted 2000-08-11 05:42 PM


great one..made me thing of my grandfather...
thank you.

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