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sgreybe
Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 209
London, UK

0 posted 2000-06-20 10:00 AM

THE TRUTH:

My heart was torn at once between
Passions, responsibilities
Your loyalty evident to see
Disappointed though you seemed

Do we not feel the same
Or is this love's foolish game
My feelings, hurts, to you so plain
Retracted, told to refrain

Joyous love, a new-found thing
Ecstatic, flowing, turbulent spring
My love, my life, myself I bring
In essence always everything

I know it's there, you feel it too
Between us then, now, it's true
Is it me, alone, forever doomed
Without the loving arms of you

Or will you accept the truth?

amazon_lover
Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland

1 posted 2000-06-20 11:17 AM

Hi Sgreybe
I think this poem speaks about a person torn in between love and torment. Nice one..

Sincerely
A_L

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

2 posted 2000-06-20 12:38 PM

this is a good poem i like it and wish to keep reading your work because it's great i love it good job.

I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member

since 2000-03-21

Posts 680
Kansas

3 posted 2000-06-20 02:41 PM

Woohoo you captured alot here. Great poem! Your flow of words are excellent! Keep up the good work.

Peace

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

4 posted 2000-06-20 05:44 PM

Isn't love the ?? for lack of a right word, I can put down here, hard, so hard.
this is so heartfelt, you coming with your all and they in reserve. and not excepting you as you are.
So what you going to do kid.

Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

AVANTI
Senior Member

since 2000-02-02

Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE

5 posted 2000-06-21 12:31 PM

great poem
the truth is painful and it hutrs but its the way of going on and beter than to live in lies...

If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao

Nancee
Junior Member

since 2000-06-17

Posts 45
Australia

6 posted 2000-06-21 12:57 PM

I know this so well, your words read with a familiar voice. Freaky.
(the feeling, not your poem)
Brilliant.

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