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sgreybe
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since 2000-04-28
Posts 209
London, UK

0 posted 2000-08-04 03:45 AM


STRUCK DOWN (AGAIN):

Up and down, a rollercoaster ride
One day the floor, the next the sky
Never calm, thrown about
With rough emotions casting doubt

I'm not at rest, I can't be whole
For with vicious claws you grip my soul
The demon-life of circular pain
Depression strikes me down again



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Hardrock
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
1 posted 2000-08-04 11:01 AM


Sylvia..Whew!! I can relate to this.  How the heck do you even out the ride without resorting to drugs?  Some oscillations I can take...but some leave me hanging out there in space.  Nicely put.  Hardrock
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
2 posted 2000-08-04 12:02 PM


Been there, done (doing) that. I think that like many things, depression is something that will never be "cured." The propensity for it will be there throughout your life.

Now this doesn't mean there's no hope. I've found that you can "treat" it, much as you would any other illness. They do have drugs... personally, I prefer to go it without them, but that is just my choice. For me, it's a matter of mind over matter... which usually works well.

For example, the other night I was feeling not too happy (LOL) and I told my friend that I would allow myself that one night to feel bad and force myself to be better the next day. And I was... I wasn't "there" but it was better. Now mind you, I'm at this point after several years of dealing with extreme depression... LOL, so maybe drugs are a better option!  

Who knows, I just knwo what you're talking about!

Chris

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
3 posted 2000-08-04 01:14 PM


Sylvia, what a true description of it. Very nice poem, and I hope you get to the good side of the rollercoaster again soon.
Peace
Sandra

Practice can make anything perfect...even grief can become an art.
Merrit Malloy



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