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fractal007
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0 posted 2000-08-03 04:14 PM


The Perversion of Science - Atom Bomb

The streets are dark now, when once they were filled
With all walks of life,
Embracing a new way of life.

Wires hang overhead, remnants of a miracle gone awry.
The last remains of the old amusement park,
Still stand amidst the clutter of ruin.

Slowly, the procession of people passes.
Faces torn off, and flesh mangled,
They are the remains of a happy world.

"Remember us, children," they whisper, for they are
All that remains of what was.

A plane flies overhead.  
"Help has arrived!" they all cry out.
But the plane just drops another bomb on a
Nearby city.

So they too will feel man's arrogance.
They too will see what it is to harness the very
Things which make up our environs.
And they too will cry and wail.

"Remember"


We are the hollow men
We are the stuffed men
Leaning together
Headpiece filled with straw. Alas!
Our dried voices, when
We whisper together
Are

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Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
1 posted 2000-08-03 04:17 PM


Remember we do, and regret what happened. A sad, terribly tragic thing.  
Deranger
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since 2000-05-10
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Somewhere, between here and there
2 posted 2000-08-03 07:05 PM


America makes no apology for the Atom bomb.  War is an ugly human fetish.  But the bottom line is: people die.  If not them, then us.  Basic survival instincts demand it be them.    I make no excuse for what my country did hell I wasn’t even born as yet.  But it is a burden I bear none the less.  



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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
3 posted 2000-08-03 10:38 PM


Intense, sad tale, how terrible that its true.
Cat...

Hardrock
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since 2000-02-14
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New Hampshire, USA
4 posted 2000-08-04 11:26 AM


War never proves who's wrong or who's right....only who's left.  Hardrock
lotharingia
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since 2000-06-04
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saarbruecken, Germany
5 posted 2000-08-04 12:05 PM


It is a terrible tragedy that we humans seek power with unspeakable destruction and violence. Our hubris is beyond comprehension.

Thanks for writing poems like this, Fractal!


Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo



fractal007
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6 posted 2000-08-04 06:08 PM


Thank you all for the compliments.  I have decided to write a series of poems on the perversion of science.  I started with this one, after I saw a television program on the atom bomb.  It turned out that the bomb dropped on Hiroshima was really a test of a newer bomb that the US had made.  That made me rather angry.

Since WW1, science has been used very much for killing people.  Consider the toxic gasses used in WW1.  That was basic chemistry.

Thank you all for your compliments.

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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Sunny Queensland
7 posted 2000-08-04 06:59 PM


Reminds me of the poem April 2031, the guy who invented the bomb (forgotten completely sorry) should have never shared it with the world.  One of my biggest fears is to be a survivor of a nuclear war like in 'The Day After!'  
Wonderful and thought provoking work here hon..  

I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
8 posted 2000-08-05 06:46 AM


I visited Hiroshima and it would be hard to imagine the necessity of dropping another bomb...I remain astonished...James
Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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Victoria Australia
9 posted 2000-08-05 06:50 AM


Fractal, thought provoking and a timely reminder that in war no-one wins.
Be well
Keth

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole

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