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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
The Dark Flickering sparks Sparkling dark Darkening paths In this labyrinth Of abandoned hearts Each one knocking Sometimes stopping Echoing away By night By day Lost somewhere In this confusion Looking everywhere For ultimate fusion For the union of Two kindred hearts Torn apart Before the dark Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beautiful. It could almost be a description of all of us here at DP. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Goodness,...you really know how to pack 'em. You are a reader's candy. I agree with Cat,...sort of sounds like us? huh? This is stunning. Be well U. *Peace. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Lotharingia, I agree how appropriate for Dark Passions..also excellent writing!! I really like this, our hearts always looking to connect. The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Uta..I could visualize all the lonely souls, wandering, searching, knocking...and hearing only the echos. So darkly beautiful. Love the way your mind works. Hardrock |
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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
I agree with Hardrock. Darkly beautiful indeed! "Darkening paths in this labyrinth of abandoned hearts"....And here we are in the dark. Great work! ~Sash~ |
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Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 197Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A. |
So very fast and furious! Yes, you have described me well. Very nice work indeed. Sing while you may -The Prophet Q'spel Your pain is for you alone As it is As it was As it will be forever Amen -The Prophet Q'spel |
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Lynne Dale Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 114Melbourne Victoria |
Sparkling dark of abandoned hearts. Wow! I'll say it again backwards Wow! Really excellent poem. Keth Kethry. When dark of night steals your soul. Think of me and be made whole. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Excellent work, indeed lotharingia... Many regards, sudhir |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Very beautiful and atmospheric one this Uta, sad too of course, but lovely. I particularly liked the first two lines: "Flickering sparks Sparkling dark" mmmmm, yes, I like that a lot...  |
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L Tiuch Member
since 2000-02-04
Posts 151NY |
Stunning in its simplicity and beaty! It sure does have a great message. Linda |
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