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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2000-08-01 01:20 PM


Wander where the thoughts are sent
clouds of black now silver tint

Portents of doom dissipate
dreams of magic resonate

Hero arrives, magnificent
loved attained to cease lament

Forever they live happily
but just within the reverie

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kynder
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since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
1 posted 2000-08-01 04:32 PM


excellent! wonderful! awesome! beautiful! exquisite! delightful! outstanding! remarkable! private library one!!! LOL
love ya moonbeam

kynder

Sunshine can not bleach
The snow,
Nor time unmake what
Poets know.

Ralph Waldo Emerson

Hardrock
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
2 posted 2000-08-01 05:32 PM


Cat..this is pure elegance in a poem.  Loved the ending.  Hardrock
Deborah1
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since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
3 posted 2000-08-01 07:31 PM


A beautiful poem!! I hear softly spoken words....Loved it!!

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

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