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fractal007
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since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958


0 posted 2000-06-18 04:38 PM


I made a very stupid and preventable mistake,
I forgot HTTP:// in front of my Homepage URL!

For pete's sake!

Now I have fixed it, and apologize,
Now the URL is correct the page is there,
For all to view and criticize.




Please forgive my for my extremely corney wording.  This poem was meant as a message about my page, and a test to see if I could get any comical value in rhyming, lol.

© Copyright 2000 fractal007 - All Rights Reserved
Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
1 posted 2000-06-18 05:25 PM


different to do but funny.

I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul



fractal007
Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958

2 posted 2000-06-18 05:49 PM


By the end of the day, my site should be good.  It may look kinda wierd right now, but that's because I'm renovating it, lol
Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
3 posted 2000-06-18 07:57 PM


So Fractal007 you know you can put your page in html here?
My home page

anyway, it's an idea. haha
HHHHHOOOOOWWWWWWLLLLLLLL

Joel.


< !signature-->

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.


[This message has been edited by Joel the wolf (edited 06-18-2000).]

fractal007
Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958

4 posted 2000-06-18 10:37 PM


Oh, BTW, my website is now up!  It's got poetry, drawings and some computer programming tutorials.  Hope you enjoy it!

We are the hollow men
We are the stuffed men
Leaning together
Headpiece filled with straw. Alas!
Our dried voices, when
We whisper together
Are

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