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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2000-07-29 05:33 PM


The cold steel chilling her hands;
Suicide,
With shaking she barely stands,
Inverting the revolver,
Must be tried,
Taking aim to resolve her
Lasting pain so consuming,
Suicide,
Past this is no returning,
Just the eternal dark bliss,
Must be tried,
She then gives the gun a kiss,
Suicide.

Gloom
For a missing friend,
to whom I think of still.


© Copyright 2000 Aszard Drazlom - All Rights Reserved
bluebrdy65
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since 2000-05-16
Posts 276
Gladys,
1 posted 2000-07-29 06:14 PM


Oh gloom I can so relate to your pain here
for I too have lost a dear friend in this manner.I understood his pain. and what drove him to that decision even though it was wrong I still love him and miss him
I have also written a poem for him.
I'm so soory for your loss
Bluebrdy

MMoonchild
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since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715
PA
2 posted 2000-07-29 07:24 PM


Gloom...sighing..I am sorry  for your loss...I never knew  sorry I put a sad  face here and it ended up looking mean..I will get that colon and semi colon thing down someday

~~soft hugs
Maureen

[This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 07-29-2000).]

Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
3 posted 2000-07-29 08:34 PM


It's sad how many choose a permanent solution to a temporary problem.  From my heart to yours, Professor.  Hardrock
Ginners
Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey
4 posted 2000-07-29 10:17 PM


this was a very good poem i am very sorry for you loss, i hope you are o.k.
--gin

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