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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
a mute voice speaks to me an unseen tear brushes me but no one is near that I can see a foreign hand touches me an unheard laugh passes me but no one is far that I can see Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
yes they do touch us in so many ways, mentally with a tear, and physically with a hand. Reaching out. telling us they are still here for us. great and spooky. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
great poem. i to believe in ghosts because i believe even a living person can be a ghost if there not seen my many people. I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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ChibiDeathscythe Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 128 |
Wow.... to me this is a beautiful, hauntingly written example of an intense interaction... great. "Suicides have already betrayed the body. Still born, they don't always die, bu dazzled, they can't forget a drug so sweet that even children would |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
I wonder,does the ghost feel us?? I liked this one!!! Click |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Hmm... a good one this! I didn't actually take it as a "ghost". It reminded me of things gone (and to me, that could only have been, like, 2 minutes ago - haha), which brought back all the ghosts of the past  Haunting words though |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
hi! thanks for all your replies! I've actually decided to change the title of this poem to "The Visitor". Allows for more interpretations! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Ghost, Visitor, - the metaphoric context is wonderful regardless |
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