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Gaze In Awe |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Let me gaze in awe Your manners.. Gracious Let me gaze in awe As you sail.. On great wings Let me gaze in awe You have the art.. Of what I mean I feel a sparkle In your presence Let me.. Gaze in awe The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Let ME gaze in awe...at your great poem. This is wonderful, Deb. Hardrock |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Beautiful, Deb. Had me thinking of an eagle. Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beautiful Deborah. Tell us what you were referring to. I see that special man, maybe after the first night, that feeling you have of amazement that you found someone so wonderful.(You know, that feeling that goes sailing away later) Or was it really about something completely different and I am stuck in the one place in my head  Either way, beautifully expressed, Cat..... |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Oh Cat this was inspired by a new-found friend that seems to have made an impression on me with his "being"...bet you can guess...... The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
I shall gaze in awe at this poem! Really good! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Deb, now that I know the meaning, I like this even more. A truly apt description. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Deborah,...this is truly a wonderful piece. "Let me gaze in awe You have the art.. Of what I mean",...oh how I love that! Take care D. *Peace. |
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LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York |
Deb, What a simple poem about someone that is so impressive too you. I like it... keep up the good writing. LarBear |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
wow deb... this is just wonderful. what a masterpiece. i loved it!!! as always, your work gets better and better. kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Gaze in awe, remember all the perfections as long as you can. Moments and memories such as these, are what legends are made of... Great work Deb I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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