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Broken_Heart
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since 2000-07-24
Posts 57
Netherlands

0 posted 2000-07-25 05:07 PM


First of I have to thank you all for the support you give me... (thanx a million everyone!!!) Indeed my poems are about me and how I feel, but, well, it gives me something to write about! Sincerely Broken_Heart

Love was not meant to be

I stand waiting
Waiting for her love to come
I may seem very crazy
Perhaps for some
Yet I wait there alone
Only darkness I can see
While holding a rose
Love was not meant for me

Blood drips across it's stem
As it stings me more and more
My tears runs beside it
As pain I feel forever more
Why does love hurt me again?
My heart crumbles into rust
As I die a little bit
My rose turns to dust
My soul is bleached by pain
What pain can you not see?
I life only for sorrow
Love was not meant to be...



Darkness upholds Light as much as Holiness downs the Evil within...

© Copyright 2000 Jean Phillippe Wijnholds - All Rights Reserved
Neala
Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
1 posted 2000-07-25 06:43 PM


Hello,
That was so very sadly wonderful. That all I can say.
-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2000-07-25 07:01 PM


Kindof reminds me of one of my last desperate attempts to reunite with my first wife.
I called her up and told her I would meet her in front of the Chicken Dinner Restaurant at Knott's Berry Farm on a Saturday moring at 11:00am.
She didn't really say for sure she would make it but I bought a dozen roses and waited from about 10 to 12 for her to show up.  Other women started asking me for the roses.  I explained that they were for a special woman that would be showing up soon.  She never showed and I gave the roses to another woman and sadly went on my way. So glad that I tried but so sad that she didn't show to collect those roses...James

StarrGazer
Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679
Texas
3 posted 2000-07-25 07:57 PM


This was sadly beautiful, nice flow excellent poem !
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