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.....Pain..... |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas 
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Death , Oh Death why cant you see The happiness and joy that has eluded me I call upon your work each night Show me a sign within my sight For the smiles of life are no longer alive All I have is pain and I feel so deprived I can not handle the sinful stares They dont understand or they simply dont care The days seem so long and the nights so cold Others are so cruel and so very bold My tears seem to shed with each rising sun I scream out "What could I have done?" For the pain within my heart is too much to bare All I want is for someone to show me they care But as the days go on and the nights bleed away The shedding of my tears are the price I pay For I have created my destiny with no light And the smiles in my heart are no longer in sight I do not love you for being perfect..... I love you for being perfect for me!! |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Very dynamic, I guess I'm loosing my smiles again, now. Joel I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
*sigh* Hmm.. can relate to this one. Very poignant. Well done  |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I can not handle the sinful stares They dont understand or they simply dont care The days seem so long and the nights so cold Others are so cruel and so very bold My tears seem to shed with each rising sun there are some raw emotions been released in your words. I hope it is helping to ease the pain. thanks for sharing. A great poem. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
this is a poem in my own type of creating except mine are shorter. i love this one and most print it out. GREAT JOB I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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pyro Junior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 12 |
this poem is brilliant i really love it you and me seem in the same disposion i really enjoyed this and hope that you will read more and you have just provoked me to release one of my sad poems that i never wanted people to read thank you very much and i hope you will write many more poems pyro |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
very powerfull. So much emotions, so much pain. Hope you're feeling better now. I know this poem is old. Thanks for sharing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
Great poem...I know what you mean...especially the "They dont understand or they simply dont care" part...nicely done.. darkstar |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
Hey, this really tore at my heart strings  You don't need to look too far.This was great work !!!!!!!! "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Wow! I could feel every word, as though you had been in my thoughts! Take care! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This poem is pretty sad. You express your pain well......too bad you have pain to express eh? Too bad there's pain eh?....too bad period......but keep writing because i like your work.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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