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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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She comes quietly from the daylight she draws up close with fine perfume. City sounds fade out of mind when lady love walks into the room. She's brings a spell to put you under an old trick you can't refuse. Hungry hearts beat like thunder when lady love walks into the room. She can glove your best endeavour and she'll melt you with her flame. Lonely souls can't find each other When lady love plays the game. Dream sailor score yourself a lover the winds of time are blowing through. There's adventures to discover when lady love walks into the room. She's got a solid gold St. Christopher, she's from the penthouse with a view and every eye will drift to her when lady love walks into the room. Bartender pour the boys a buffer it's another highball afternoon. They just can't stay undercover when lady love walks into the room She's got dancing rosy color she's taking steps on new old shoes so dream sailor score yourself a lover here comes lady love into the room. [This message has been edited by ethome (edited 07-26-2000).] |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Cool I really liked this one  LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas |
SWEET but with such great flow of emotion! I really like this one myself.  You have my vote! love & all, -Holly I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of. Michel de Montaigne |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Heather and Holly for you kind comments, much appreciated.. |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
awesome poem..such beauty...very graceful this lady is I have to say... very well captured... lovely work If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you very much AVANTI I appreciate your kind comments........ethome.. |
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Gossamerwings Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 207 |
Wonderful! I love this poem.  Gossamerwings |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
well written..gotta love it!  dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I could eat your rhyme flow and cadence with a spoon my friend... excellent, as always... later-poetically-perfect-gator jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Gossamerwings, dg, and Janet Marie, much appreciated. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Excellent Work, ethome... My regards, sudhir... |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Here's a vote for Lady Love! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Sudhir and Insect much appreciated. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
very nice Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a wonderful description of lady love Ethome! A tale beautifully told! Best wishes, /Kit |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is a phenomenal poem, I love it! Have to find more of yours to read. I have to come to this forum more often, catalinamoon,(dark passions) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ How I missed this is beyond me ... but ... caught up with it and love it. Really enjoy the movement of it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
What a lady this must be. You make her sound wonderful. Loved it. Juls |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks so much Prometheus, Cantalinamoon, Kit and Marge for your kind comments. |
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