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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2000-06-18 10:21 PM



May I please
have this dance
let me hold you
take a chance

The lights are low
the rhythm's right
please say you will
dance with me tonight

You may just find
your dreams come true
when I dance
this dance with you

So may I please
have this dance
all I need
is just one chance.

-SEA-

© Copyright 2000 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
Parker
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1 posted 2000-06-18 10:39 PM


SEA..... I love to slow dance..... If you insist, twist my arm please.

Soft, slow, very close
whispers in the ear,
warm breath on neck
fingertips sliding down
fire rushing through the nerves.....

Parker

SEA
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2 posted 2000-06-18 11:49 PM


James~ I too love to slow dance.......damn, you hit some buttons....that is the best reply I've ever recieved! Thank you, SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


Justbleu
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3 posted 2000-06-19 07:34 PM


Very cute!!  Dancing with that special person is soooo very wonderful!!  Very nice!!

Bridgette  


"Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved." -Unknown


Kit McCallum
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4 posted 2000-06-19 07:40 PM


Beautiful poem SEA!  I've heard a few lines on the dance floor, but NONE as romantic as this! Wonderful poem (now if all the men could memorize this ... hmmm ...) Well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

X Angel
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5 posted 2000-06-19 07:45 PM


mmmm nice!
this was a great lil temptation to go dancing!

~Heather

Colin
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6 posted 2000-06-20 03:11 PM


I'm with the X there  

Eric.

"We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka.

Dusk Treader
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7 posted 2000-06-20 03:32 PM


Oh, loved this one.. Definetly inspiration to go out on the dance floor with that special one.

"You may just find
your dreams come true
when I dance
this dance with you"

Enjoyed!


Abrahm Simons

"Keep on dreamin' boy 'cause when you stop dreaming it's time to die" - Blind Melon

CMGrimm
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8 posted 2000-06-21 04:33 PM


luvit luvit, luvit luvit...

click...


chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.



gothicmoth
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9 posted 2000-06-21 04:35 PM


This is really good.
serenity blaze
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10 posted 2000-06-21 05:50 PM


Kind of you to ask...but would you mind terribly if I dance with Parker first?  Whew!

damn, Parker, what did you go and do THAT for?  

Nice work, BOTH of you!!!Now how about a tango?

insect
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11 posted 2000-06-23 10:43 PM


Two worlds dancing around a star
So close in a universe so far
Floating endless
Timeless
Forever entwined
Souls combine  

bsquirrel
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12 posted 2000-07-01 06:33 PM


I'd lead, but my size 16 shoes will probably get in the way (not joking). But you know what they say about guys with big feet, right? It's hell trying to buy socks. Frankly I never understood that. It's a hell of a lot harder trying to buy shoes.  

Mike

Janet Marie
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13 posted 2000-07-01 11:29 PM


LOL at BSQ and his socks lol
GREAT POEM SEA-GATOR
I'll dance wich ya  
later  
jm

What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly
~LaoTzeTao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~


Siren's Song
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14 posted 2000-07-02 11:57 PM


Brought me back to the Sadie Hawkins dance.. and yes, I would still dance with him today... )
wonderful poem..

Dark Angel
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15 posted 2000-07-03 07:06 AM


SEA, A wonderful poem  
You may just find
your dreams come true
when I dance
this dance with you
voted!  

Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive,
my body goes on, my spirit has died,
and I though alive, feel dead inside.

"Rose Petal"


SEA
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16 posted 2000-07-03 09:28 AM


Bridgette~ thanks  

Kit~ yes, they really need to learn some good lines before they go dancing,  

X Angel~  

Eric~  

Dusk Treader~ shall we dance?!  

Chris~ thank you  

Gothicmoth~ thanks  

Serenity~ thank you

Insect~ always a *sigh*  

Mike~ good grief man, how tall are you anyway?  

Janet~ put on some Prince and let's shake it!  

Siren's Song~ thank you  

Dark Angel~ you are most talented, thanks!  

-SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB



BSC
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17 posted 2000-07-24 10:39 PM


SEA - Such a dance....oh, this is beautiful.  Bonnie
RainbowGirl
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18 posted 2000-07-25 08:54 AM


Got my vote as well Sea...

HUGS

"If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost;
that is where they should be.
Now put the foundations under them."


Heather Miller
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19 posted 2000-07-25 10:02 AM


Oh yes, it got my vote too  
I love to dance fast or slow and that was the best lines I've ever read I do agree with the others(wishing others would memorize this one before going out) Very well written............Where were you when I was younger.......LOL
LITL,
Heather


With God all things are possible.

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