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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert 
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If I had words to say to change your mind Would they mean anything at all Words are so simple to a heart that’s blind It’s like bringing a net after the fall If I were to capture on film the image Of how foolish you now seem to be Would it be enough to bring you home Back to your place beside me? If I could play a melody so bitter yet sweet Would it encompass you with truth you can hear Or is it too late for any of these things Alone, I now shed a tear |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AZBlond~ Enjoyed the wistful longing in this one. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
beautifully sad *HUG* Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I like this one too. It's sad and wistful.  |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts. Often simple phrases say a heart full of feeling. Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
well written poem... sad but beautiful words.. If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
very sad. hugs, Heather Without the experiance of love where would we be?We would have no wonderful memories to cherish.With love it brings hurt with hurt brings bittersweet |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
sensing much longing for that which is lost..  sadly wonderful.. dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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