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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Darkness has fallen, but the night is still so bright. Dancing in the shadows of the moonlight tonight. Music playing softly, as we take another sip of wine. I see the twinkle in your eyes, as I catch them watching mine. The mood of the night is so peaceful and serene. This mystical moment is almost like a dream. The sensation of this evening stirs a passion deep within. As I hear your soothing whisper carried on the gentle wind. And as this midnight escapade continues to unfold. We find within each other, a treasure to behold. As our shadows from the moonlight dance upon the wall. Together we will savor the enchantment of it all. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
NO fair.. that sounds much too wonderful.. Good Poem Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
this is such a wonderful piece... there is always something about that moonlight...and night then the wine very romantic.. well written If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eloise~ Beautiful ........ 'The sensation of this evening stirs a passion deep within. As I hear your soothing whisper carried on the gentle wind.' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Wonderful imagery Eloise Excellent piece  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Whispers to me of wonderful things, beautiful poem |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Moonlight, dancing and shadows, great images. Thanks, Pete |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
To quote you "a treasure to behold".  |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Thanks to all of you for reading and your wonderful comments. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Eloise! Denise |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
breathtakingly enchanting, hauntingly beautiful... Great work, Eloise, Regards, sudhir |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I remember this challenge. (?)"In the moonlight, shadows dancing?" I'm sorry I missed this piece! You've created a very beautiful, romantic, wonderful poem from it! Great job! I really enjoyed this one, as for a moment, I was in a different place |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Denise, Sudhir, thank you both so much. Your comments are always appreciated. WhtDove, good memory! LOL I believe it was a hoot challenge back in Open #5 or #6. I'm glad you got to read it this time and you liked it. Thanks for the read. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Eloise-- this is so beautifully done! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Hey Eloise - so nice to see you here! And with a beautiful poem too... K |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Thank you Martie. Appreciate the read. Kamla, thank you so much. It's been quite a while since I've talked to you. |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
Eloise... I love love poems that use the night as its setting.. moonlight is always so wonderfully intoxicating, I often sit in my garden to find the feeling that's described so vividly by your poem.. thanks!!! - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
James, thank you for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I know what you mean about the moonlight. It is one of my favorite things to write about. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is lovely serene and tender with romance laced in with the shadows a very "pretty" read  take care jm I think I could need - this in my life If you're gone - baby you need to come home there's a little bit of something me In everything in you MB20 |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Do the rules really say that we can only vote once? Denise |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Janet, sorry I missed you the last time around, but thank you for reading and commenting. Denise, thanks, that's really sweet of you. |
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