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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia 
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THE SPECIAL PLACE by Linda Munday A solitary figure sat on a rock beneath the lunar glow He sat there quietly remembering of a lover he did know Who had given all her heart to him in a gentle ebbing flow Of care and trust and love and unconditionally so. He felt her love with every wave that he watched come up the beach He felt her care like grains of sand into each pore they reach He felt her trust and empathy floating on the breezy air He felt her kisses on his lips, although she wasn't there. He touched his chest and fondly remembered that sweet night When all alone on their special rock, he held her oh so tight And felt her love and felt her pain and took it to himself As tide rolled in they'd made their love on that their rocky shelf. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
very nice and thoughtful piece... jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Poe Ay New Member
since 2000-06-30
Posts 9 |
Fantastic imagery. I could feel the emotion, but yet it left me wondering why? Poe Ay. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written. Enjoyed your poem. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
well written, lovely flow and the most delightful images  Loved this piece Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
excellent..the imagery, the rhyme and most of all the lovefilled tender emotions jm What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Poe Ay New Member
since 2000-06-30
Posts 9 |
Prom... ty or do i call you jamie? Poe Ay... it was supposed to. Mike.. love your stuff. Tracie... ty very much.. made me feel good. Janet... emotions.. sometimes they are just too powerful for our own good...lol |
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