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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Caress me with your silken luminesce gently weave your enigma your sweet soft glow around me, inside me and through me luminate the dark untrod places of my soul warm the deep frozen voids with your essence let me yield to you and surrender my arms wholly to embrace what I fear most |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
the last line was the clincher...big time yes here |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Well Miss Moonshine, this is lovely, so beautiful... Well Done !!  Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died, and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Thanx for your lovely reply WOW I am glad that you liked my poem.Thanx M, for your lovely reply, your comments and your encouragement - I really appreciate it |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Moonshine, Very much loved, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Thanx for your lovely reply and comment Cerenity - I am glad that you enjoyed my poem. Moonshine. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
A serene poem and like Walt says, the last line was a clincher... yep, Moonshine, I liked this one... regards, sudhir |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Hey there Sudhir, Thanx for reading and replying to my poem. I am glad that you enjoyed reading it. Moonshine. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oh my, don't I love that last line...the entire work is superb but that last line says so much.....click...... |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
loved this! dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
lovely poem... very well written... If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Thanx for your lovely replies ethome, dgvarner and avanti. I am glad that you read and enjoyed my poem. Moonshine. |
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