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Mike
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0 posted 2000-06-25 03:22 AM




                Comes forth the Spring in verdant glory,
                Time of Lent, of Easter's story,
                Greening of the Kansas plains,
                Begat of Eostre's birthing rains,
                Demeter unto to us does render,
                Fertile plains of natural splendor,
                Winter wheat from earth does waken,
                As newborn fawn, first steps are taken,
                Behold the vernal equinox,
                Night and day of equal clocks,
                Resurrection, flowers bloom,
                Comes forth the Spring, from Winter's tomb.

                Helios bakes the Kansas plains,
                Long since void of cooling rains,
                Summer's sun in cruel attack,
                Beating down on farmer's back,
                Cattle in the pond a cooling,
                Young boys catch sun perch a schooling,
                Lazy summer afternoons,
                In cool of night, the bullfrog croons,
                July the 4th, the big parade,
                Watch from the porch, pink lemonade,
                Fireflies, a wished for breeze,
                Cicadas sing night's symphonies.

                Vicissitudes of summer's flight,
                Wings of geese at frost's first bite,
                Pumpkins ripened on the vine,
                As hunter's moon, above does shine,
                Fiery blaze of autumn's glory,
                Portends Persophene's purgatory,
                Cornucopias of fruited plain,
                Bounties of Demeter's grain,
                Verdant valleys, rising mist,
                Sleeping flora by Helios kissed,
                As zephyr warms a cooling land,
                Last vestige of hot summer's hand.

                From Kansas plains, the autumn flees,
                Frost's crystal flakes kiss barren trees,
                Sans summer clothes, shed weeks ago,
                Before iced thrust, of winter's snow,
                On garden's path, God's palette faded,
                Landscape brown, and spirits jaded,
                Hued petals to the earth returned,
                Bright tints of life, the cold has spurned,
                Persophones to depths is taken,
                As mankind waits with faith unshaken,
                Within her arms, the primrose flowers,
                Rebirth of life, come springtime showers.

                I walk along a Kansas lane,
                Amidst the awe, doth gods ordain.

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brian madden
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ireland
1 posted 2000-06-25 08:07 AM


Mike, truely amazing imagery

Vicissitudes of summer's flight,
                Wings of geese at frost's first bite,
                Pumpkins ripened on the vine,
                As hunter's moon, above does shine,
                Fiery blaze of autumn's glory,
                Portends Persophene's purgatory,
                Cornucopias of fruited plain,
                Bounties of Demeter's grain,
                Verdant valleys, rising mist,
                Sleeping flora by Helios kissed,
                As zephyr warms a cooling land,
                Last vestige of hot summer's hand.

                
wow. stunning poem. beautifully written. WOW
has my vote.

"An abyss that lasted creation A circus complete with all fools
Foundations that lasted the ages Then ripped apart at their roots"
joy division

Janet Marie
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2 posted 2000-06-25 09:48 AM


and I too have now walked this Kansas Lane..
and I too am awed by its beauty.
thank you.
exceptional writing
jm

Poet deVine
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3 posted 2000-06-25 09:48 AM


This should be the 'official Kansas state poem'. I love it.  
Meadowmuse
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4 posted 2000-06-25 11:41 AM


Your words are so inspiring to me...this piece gives us Nature in her unrestrained splendor, and your portrayal is pure and grand art.

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


Denise
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5 posted 2000-06-25 12:11 PM


One of my favorites, Mike! I agree with Sharon, this should be the official state poem!  

Denise

Martie
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6 posted 2000-06-25 12:42 PM


I love this poem, Mike...it is a strong and sensory look at lovely.  It is a bravo!!!  
Munda
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7 posted 2000-06-25 04:27 PM


         Great poem Mike, but where are the sonnets ?  
Mike
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8 posted 2000-06-27 11:32 PM


brian...appreciate the wow...  thanks muchly.
Janet Marie... yep... for being a flat state, Kansas has it strong points.  thank you for the gracious reply.
Ms. deVine... somehow I don't foresee myself as Kansas's poet laureate.. hehe  thanks.
Claire...  *smile* thank you ever so much for  your reply.
Denise... come visit us here in Kansas anytime.. if that boss will let you have a day off or two...  thanks.
Martie... thank you for the gracious comment my friend.
Munda... sonnet?  *smile*  appreciate your reply.

wayoutwalt
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9 posted 2000-07-18 10:06 AM


mike you talent is unfathomable yuh
Mike
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10 posted 2000-07-19 12:14 PM


smiling here Walt.. I agree.. it is unfathomable...
thanks for the comment.

X Angel
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11 posted 2000-07-19 04:17 PM


WOW
I was exhausted by the time I finished reading this poem, this was an incredible piece of art! Beautiful visuals, great wording, wowowowowow!

one huge vote coming up for this awesome poem
~H

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