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Sven
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East Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2000-06-24 01:45 AM


Standing here, waiting to begin
     Looking back at where we've been
You came into my life from out of the blue
And I can't think of a better time
                       than this to tell you

A lot has happened from the start
     Since the begining, you've had my heart
From the day we met "we were more than friends"
And my love "I can hardly wait
                       till we meet again"

Walking together with hope in our hands
     I've given hope, you've helped me stand
From each other my love we draw strength
There's nothing for you I wouldn't do
                       I'd go to any length

We never knew which way we'd walk
     We would just hold hands and talk
"If you don't really know where you want to go
It doesn't matter which road you take"
                       Our hearts will know

The band warms up and begins to play
     My love, how I've waited for this day
To be here with you since we took that chance
To do the one thing that we've never done. . .
                       . . . We've never danced. . .


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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



© Copyright 2000 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

1 posted 2000-06-24 04:35 AM


Oh yes, dance, dance the night away.... beautiful Sven  

My grief lies onward and my joy behind
(Shakespeare)

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
2 posted 2000-06-24 05:12 AM


Oh Sven this is a fav of mine and I really enjoyed reading it again  
Thanks for the read buddy and you have my vote  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2000-06-24 09:25 AM


Lovely!  
CMGrimm
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 685
USA
4 posted 2000-06-24 09:27 AM


Great job Sven..

chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.



Marina
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since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario
5 posted 2000-06-24 11:34 AM


This one says so much.  Most certainly a good addition to any poetry book.

Marina

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

6 posted 2000-06-24 03:46 PM


one of my most favs of yours
and so perfect to reflect your work here.
jm

Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263

7 posted 2000-06-24 03:51 PM


This is a touching testament to your heart's entrusted, my friend...

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


Joannak
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since 2000-03-11
Posts 121
Indiana, USA
8 posted 2000-06-24 05:54 PM


Sven,  
I read this poem weeks ago, and I am glad to see it here.  I cannot get it out of my head, and it is by far my favorite of all of your postings.  It conjures up some wonderful images for me, love it.

Joanna


What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury



X Angel
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since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521
Oregon
9 posted 2000-06-28 01:11 PM


*big sigh*
yep this was nice!

(now I have this weird achey feeling in my chest.....ya made me all sorta sad, in a good way LOL)
twas a good'un Sven, you never disappoint me!
~Heather

Colin
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 596
Callington, Cornwall, England
10 posted 2000-06-28 04:44 PM


*starting the music playing* Grab her quick Sven   Yet another goody from the pen of Sven.

Eric.

"We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka.

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
11 posted 2000-06-28 04:47 PM


Great writing my friend.  Some day you will dance . . . I know it.

LW


Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility.
--William Wordsworth

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
12 posted 2000-07-03 04:13 PM


Hi Sven,

And your words just danced right in to my heart, this is beautiful, really enjoyed.

Love, Cerenity

Irie
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since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493
Washington State
13 posted 2000-07-03 05:18 PM


And please.....
Dance the night away, never stop!  

This is wonderful Sven. Glad to see it back my friend!


~Sheri

Sven
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14 posted 2000-07-23 11:16 PM


I just wanted to thank everyone for voting for this poem. . .

Thank you all. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Heather Miller
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since 2000-07-19
Posts 409
Bryan, Ohio USA
15 posted 2000-07-23 11:39 PM


Very beautiful Sven
I love to dance
This was beautiful
LITL,
Heather


With God all things are possible.

Heather Miller
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since 2000-07-19
Posts 409
Bryan, Ohio USA
16 posted 2000-07-23 11:41 PM


sorry forgot to vote on it, so had to come back LOL
LITL,
Heather

With God all things are possible.

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
17 posted 2000-07-24 08:51 AM


If I were to take your hand
and you would sway me with the band
would I be yours then to command...

lead on...

Sunny

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
18 posted 2000-07-24 09:43 AM


Sven Oh how very nice!!!! LIkED IT!!!  
Bridgette


"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Fred Hobbs
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since 1999-06-08
Posts 329
Tallahassee, Florida, US
19 posted 2000-07-24 10:19 AM


Good one Sven.  Great sentiment and verse.
You have my vote.
fh

Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
20 posted 2000-07-24 10:28 AM


Ahhh, romantic Sven ... this just danced into my heart! Wonderful!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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