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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas 
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-Silence Surrounds Me- the silence now surrounds me your passionate eyes are no where to see your precious face has certainly left it's trace your fingers that once traced their way across the small of my back the feel of your body next to mine is what i now lack those comforting arms I've grown accustom to are now gone my emotions have crashed from feeling so alive & fullfilled to completely alone i feel the infinite sadness start to grow it feels like it's closing in on my very soul how I miss those precious lips to kiss how I long to be wrapped in your quilt of love once again you filled so many holes in my heart and helped it start to mend now my mind is lingering in the past missing, wanting, longing, and wondering how I could have made it last I long to have you again, to hold, to kiss, to taste, to smell, to completely inhale you into my whole being but for now the silence surrounds me my heart forever imprisoned--never to be set free HLB 2000 I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of. Michel de Montaigne |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
long to have you again, to hold, to kiss, to taste, to smell, to completely inhale you into my whole being but for now the silence surrounds me my heart forever imprisoned--never to be set free a powerful piece Holly, quite sad but wonderfully written |
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Christopher J Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 94 |
What can I say?...yet again, another excellent poem...keep writing and i'll keep reading!! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oh my...you've expressed your ache divinely in this emotional and sensual piece...VERY well expressed ... I know this ache ...it runs deep ... you have captured its essence well take care jm |
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas |
OK GUYS (and girls)  Thank you again for this high praise. You all keep this up and I'll start thinking I'm doing something right here. LOL Huge thank yous and hugs! -Holly I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of. Michel de Montaigne |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Great job holly... luvitluvitluvitluvit ouknowiluvit lol chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
*sigh* this fits my mood today! ~Heather |
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas |
Chris sweetie- Thank you for the sweet words...as always you are adoring. I'm glad you liked it.  Heather-I know those moods all too well. thanks again, -Holly I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of. Michel de Montaigne |
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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa |
such heartfelt emotion unbridled here. wow, left me breathless and speechless. had to read a second time before responding. wonder why this had to happen? what went wrong? good job. P. J. Kotrch carpe diem A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
Absolutely speechless, well written... hope to see more of your poems. - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
This is excellent. . . the silence is always there. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Sorry to say, but I know exactly what this poem means!!!!!  Wonderful expression in words! LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas |
Sven, Epoet, James, & Heather- < !signature-->Thank you for your encouraging comments. It's means alot when others "get" your poems and understand what you are speaking of.  love & all, -Holly I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of. Michel de Montaigne [This message has been edited by Holly (edited 07-25-2000).] |
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas |
Epoet- As far as for why...I'm really not sure. I guess sometimes we have our timing all off when it comes to meeting others in life. It seems mine is anyway. But a lasting, loving, honest "no holds bar" kind of friendship has came out of this...and at least he's still in my life in a positive way. Thanks again for your sweet words. I'm so glad you got the emotion I was trying so hard to put into it. Thank you for reading!! love & all, -Holly |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hi Holly....very well done...emotionally powerful...feelings right on the page right where you left part of your heart....... have a good day...ethome.. |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Holly, This is so full of heartfelt emotion, expressed so beautifully. Bonnie |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Holly~ Your emotions are very well expressed in this piece...Much longing and heartfelt feelings...well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
when we sit beside the fire-glow and let the embers warm our feet ... hand in hand with the one we love ... it brings the feeling of everlasting contentment but when the fire burns low and the one we love has to leave ... this lets the cool breeze bite deeply into a side that has been sheltered ... I know the feelings that accompany that breeze A sad poem you've written thanks for sharing |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
but for now the silence surrounds me for now.... very lovely expression of lost love.... Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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