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insect
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0 posted 2000-06-20 11:40 PM



    DESTINY TRAIN

CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA!                              
CHOO! CHOO!                                                                        
I feel the train rolling down the track
Screeching wheels and people standing back                      
                                                                                      
CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA!          
TOOT! TOOT!
The whistle blows a steam engine's laughter
All aboard! For happily ever after                      

CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA!
CHOO! CHOO!
I miss my love and I want her back
Longing for her love on this endless track

CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA!
CHOO! CHOO!
A golden ring echoes her name
This mighty engine, my destiny train                          

CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA!
CHOO! CHOO!
A million miles of plains and tunneled mountains
My heart pumps fresh as spring feed fountains

CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA!  
CHOO! CHOO!
A thousand towns passed along the way
My love grows stronger each and everyday

CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA!
TOOT! TOOT!
The whistle blows as the mighty train slows
My love is waiting, the purest winter rose

CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA!  
CHOO! CHOO!
She said I do and I said the same
Happily ever after on the destiny train


© Copyright 2000 insect - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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with you
1 posted 2000-06-21 12:02 PM


Insect~ all I can say is.....*voted*   -SEA
bsquirrel
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2 posted 2000-06-21 02:40 AM


Insect, thanks for the buzz. That was REAALLLY stupid. Okay, I'll say this. Love the "winter rose." Reminds me of a poem I wrote a long while back, with the quote "winter bees drop dead in white honey." Wow, that has insects in it, too. Okay, I'm going to shut up now, and vote.

Mike

Parker
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since 2000-01-06
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3 posted 2000-06-21 05:59 AM


Ok, my votes in, this is a cool idea, for a bug.

So bee, find's purest winter rose.... some pollination going on here....

Parker

Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
4 posted 2000-06-21 06:08 AM


Clever and well penned Insect ... ya left me smilin'       (click)

Best wishes,
/Kit

X Angel
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since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521
Oregon
5 posted 2000-06-21 01:30 PM


what fun to read this to a child!

I like!
~Heather

insect
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since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014

6 posted 2000-06-21 11:24 PM


SEA…Thank you SEA very much I can't wait to see all
            the poets from passions in this wonderful idea
            for a book. This book will be as big as the SEA!

Bsquirrel…Thanks Mike LOL's. I love comments like that
                   and any other kind relating to insects or anything
                   in the world around them. Thanks for flying on to
                   the Destiny Train from that Rocky cliff! LOL  

Haleyja…Thanks for the comet Haley! I mean comment!Haley

Kit McCallum…Thank you Kit I did work hard on this one (click)
                           Do you hear a train coming?  

X Angel…Thank you so much! A nice message for future poets.
                  I hope they have fun with it! Please let me know, it's
                  great to see kids laugh and smile!  

Novacaine For The Soul
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since 2000-05-26
Posts 122
New Orleans
7 posted 2000-06-21 11:33 PM


dear insect,
     i'm honestly not quite sure why, but this poem grabbed me somehow... it's got my vote for the book...

sincerely,
a sad tomato

you're such a beautiful freak... i wish there were more just like you...

Colin
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 596
Callington, Cornwall, England
8 posted 2000-06-22 07:46 AM


*running about shouting "WOO-WOO!!" *

Eric.

"We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka.

insect
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since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014

9 posted 2000-06-25 10:36 PM


Novacaine For The
Soul                        …thank you very much for the tomato!

Eric Williams…Quick! Jump for it!!


Thanks for taking a ride on the Destiny Train


[This message has been edited by insect (edited 06-25-2000).]

Christopher J
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 94

10 posted 2000-06-26 05:56 AM


Yep, No doubts about voting for this one Insect..well done!
insect
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since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014

11 posted 2000-07-06 11:12 PM


Christopher J…All aboard! Looks like you’re the only
                          one today sir! Would you care to ride
                          first class as usual? Thank you sir and
                          thank you for taking the Destiny Train.

insect
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since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014

12 posted 2000-08-02 11:08 PM


All aboard! For happily ever after
dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
13 posted 2000-08-02 11:28 PM


  this is so sweet..i love the "destiny train" idea!

enjoyed reading  

dg


"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


insect
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since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014

14 posted 2000-08-04 09:24 PM


dgvarner…Thank you for riding the Destiny Train
                   May all your dreams be on the Destiny Train  

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
15 posted 2000-08-05 02:14 PM


Wow you're rolling on your bogies Insect I got to vote for this one it's great!
insect
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since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014

16 posted 2000-08-06 03:22 PM


CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA!
CHOO! CHOO!
The mighty train screeches through a turn
Loves tight corners helped by bogies as we learn

kat
Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387

17 posted 2000-08-09 12:07 PM


Insect:  This train is pretty full and not only that! I think I just missed it!!!
Umm!! Wait!! Wait for Pickles!! lmao!

Loved the way you've written this one! It was fun to read and I enjoyed it alot!  

kat

insect
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since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014

18 posted 2000-08-09 12:35 PM


I'm waiting for you in the food car!
Are you hungry? Pickles!!
Glad  your on the Destiny Train!
Let's rock and roll!!
CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA!
TOOT! TOOT!



[This message has been edited by insect (edited 08-09-2000).]

Tiziano
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since 2000-07-26
Posts 14

19 posted 2000-08-10 10:26 AM


Interesting concept.
Tiziano

insect
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since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014

20 posted 2000-12-23 11:28 PM


Tiziano…Thank you
                 The Destiny Train is always ready to roll

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