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Loving You
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Loving You |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Loving You Certain that the day’s travels Had drained our wells of strength, Content to lay curled head upon chest, leg flung across waist And in the laying there Allowing awareness of air softly stirring With subtle variation, Dust particles reversing direction In three quarter time with the arrhythmic beat emanating from within, hum from the ceiling fan slowing as lips grow possessive a sense of soaring, dreamily, details lost in the abstract, each yielding with the intent to mirror as closely as possible the essence of the other. © 2000 Corinne Bailey |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Funny how we find energy for some things when we think we were exhausted....lol Lovely Poem. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
This goes to the top of my list as one of the most beautifully sensuous I've ever read. - 5*'s for sure |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Corinne... I can only say: This Is Hot!!!!!! Oh, my...do you know how beautiful this is? So soft, laid back....like love on a summer afternoon.... Thank you for the pleasurable moments!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Corinne, absolutely beautiful poem. veru sensual. "Beyond all this good is the terror,The grip of a mercenary hand,When savagery turns all good reason, There's no turning back, no last stand,"I.Curtis |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Yes, Prometheus, finding an inner strength. Wilfred, thank you so much, wasn't sure I could pull this one off, that words would fail to convey the emotions. Sunny1, thank you, thank you, thank you! Thank you, too Brian! Corinne |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Corrine What a lovely trip to paradise. Thank you for the ride. didi |
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T McCoy Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 186 |
BEAUTIFUL!!! i miss those times... nicely done Corrine... Tony  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Corinne, You certainly have a way with words, uhh, uh. Thanks for sharing this. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, Didi, Tony (they will come around again, Tony) and Bill! Corinne |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Wow... another beauty C good to read you again K"He looked across the silky surface of the Severn... it was a famously difficult river with fierce tides..." From Jack Maggs |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Corinne--Sensory, sensual...I do like the way your write! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, Severn and Martie. Really got into the writing of this one - lol! Corinne |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
What a wonderful picture this paints... rest, a sense of accomplishment and completion and most of all, that time spent being close to someone very special. Very good indeed  Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corrine~ Ooh, Yeah Baby !  You definitely pulled it off in sensual fashion ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks Under! Thank you, Marge, baby! Corinne |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Corinne, this is so loving and softly sensual.. hum from the ceiling fan slowing as lips grow possessive I love the image from those two lines. Thanks for the little peak into your living room. Parker |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
ohhhh mannnnn..(ahemm...Lady)...this is so beautiful and so  ...this is by far your best one yet...Now I miss me Sweetness and yearn for her so.... |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, Park, oh the mystery of love, yes? Seriously though, glad you enjoyed it. Mark, thank you! LOL - loved the HOT icon, too! It's in the missing that makes us anticipate next joining... Corinne |
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