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MMoonchild
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0 posted 2000-08-14 03:13 AM





From Behind Closed Eyes (inspired)


I dance your dream each night,
as the moon shines it's light
on the spirit of you.

My hands touch your cheek,
brushing the desire from your lips
pressing them to mine.

From behind closed eyes,
your lips kiss away my tears
bathing me in a world of softness.

Your arms surround me in comfort,
tightening their hold, allowing
my spirit to flow through to you.

Draped in your gown of love,
I am blended into the
colors of your thoughts.

Your words fall upon me, caressing,
bringing life to my "within"
feeding my heart and soul.

You are my food for thought,
my drink to quench my thirst,
and my breaths to release my sighs.

You are, my necessities in life,
my calm in the dark,
and the light in every waking moment.

Maureen
8*2k






[This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 08-14-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Maureen - All Rights Reserved
EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...
1 posted 2000-08-14 04:26 AM


I can relate all too well to this one.

I dance your dream each night,
as the moon shines it's light
on the spirit of you.

Love it I do!


God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown



jfilius
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since 2000-08-14
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2 posted 2000-08-14 04:55 AM


You do very wonderful work!
i am new to this but i enjoyed
your poem and i will look forward to
reading the rest of your writings!
           Very profesional!
              
                              John


ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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3 posted 2000-08-14 05:24 AM


It's not hard to believe that this is inspired, because it certainly reads that way with such beauty and grace.....beautiful Maureen!
MMoonchild
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4 posted 2000-08-14 08:32 AM


jfilius

John, I have no idea what professional is...but if there was money in it I would love to be...welcome and you will love it here
~~soft smiles
Maureen

MMoonchild
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5 posted 2000-08-14 02:07 PM


EagleOne

I am  happy when an eagle comes to rest on my brances and nests for a short time with me
~~soft smiles
Maureen

MMoonchild
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6 posted 2000-08-14 02:11 PM


E. well you know that  sensual DS...he leaves trails of thoughts behind him and I pick up after him ocassionally...thanks
~~soft smiles
Maureen

John Yaws
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7 posted 2000-08-14 02:23 PM


Lovely piece of writing, Maureen. I can empathize with this one.
MMoonchild
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8 posted 2000-08-17 12:51 PM


Gunslinger

thank you for your lovely comment and for taking the time to read and respond
~~soft smiles
Maureen

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